The app is acting weird when I was highlighting and trying to respond to your comments after the one about the haircut. So I've copied and pasted them here instead to see if this way will work.

And, she went to the barber, for the male cut. Usually, women will go to the hairstylist. So, the word, “barber”, caught my eye. Yeah, I actually went back and forth on that one (between hairstylist and barber). At the end I went for barber because hairstylist was one syllable too long. And choosing a place for male cuts felt like a middle finger pointed at "him", men in general, and perhaps life in general, like the sunrise and sunset that we can't control. LoL

Subtitle: I didn’t catch the sunrise/sunset aspect as much as her action (haircut) which changed everything.That was in her control. The sunrise and sunset are not. Yup yup yup! The rotating earth is out of our control and all the external factors in her life.

Do the title and subtitles clash though? Should/Could I change the subtitle?

It empowers her to focus on her choice/actions that result in a rainbow.The universe smiled (rainbow) because she did what was right for her — walked away from an empty decade with someone who could not love her for who she was. The relief after the storm. You've explained more and so much better than I ever could!

Punctuation: Thank you!! Fixed them all! :D

Now, I just need to find a pic I took in the past that might suit it. But first, c.o.f.f.e.e. ! LoL

Love you, Pockett D!! Have a great evening and week!